I wanna be a Kanban-Musume

Today I am going to write about these things;
1.How do you think your academic writing has changed?
2.What do you think you still need work on?
3.What do you think you can do well now?
4.What will you work on the hardest in your final essay?

ANSWERS
1, I think my way of quoting has changerd because I didn't know the quoting rule at all.
2. I need to get more vocabulary at first. I think in order to write persuasive essay, I need to express what I think in various way.
Next, I am not good at quoting from other's opinion so that I make my topic stronger. Always my quote is a bit artificial. I should learn how to use quotation naturally.
3. I think I got to consider what lacks of in the essay in order to make it persuasive and clear to understand. I add quotration or explanation, or erase some quotation or explanation.
4.In my final essay, I kept in mind that making detail explanation about most everything concerned with my thesis. I think that made my thesis more persuasive.


Then, I want to write about my part-time job plan! Actually I am thinking about starting new part-time job seriously. Yesterday I talked about that topic; what is the best job for us, all day with Rina. I am working in Hotel as a meal server (too expensive pay!). However I have some trouble in the work as a server. That is, maybe you can not see what it is like, I can't bring 3 dishes at the same time. It is very serious problem! That makes work so slowry. Anyway I am seaching for something good job.

I am going to raise what I hope in part-time job.
1, The working place is near my hometown is better.
2, I wish I worked in little shop or restraunt as a star stuff!
3, Pay is beyond 900 yen per an hour.

Maybe that's all. Especially, 2 is important! Cany you see what I mean?
I use this expression, Star stuff, at first though. You can say it in Japanese as Kanban-musume. The girl who works in the restaurant and is like a mascot of the store. Is is fabulous? All Kanban-musume have good relationship with customers and often chat with them. Because I like to talk with stranger or people senior to me, it must be the best job for me. However as I read back I wrote; have good relationship with customers and often chat with them, it seems that Kanban-musume is a job like Hostes, isn't it?

Actually the part-time job as a kanban-musume never exist! Kanban-musume is like title given by customer or owner. All I can do is working at tiny restaurant or bar as a stuff. Whether I can become a Kanban-musume is what others decide. Just because I am eager to be a Kanban-musume make me real Kanban-musume. I need to work so hard that all customer and owner admire me and that customer want to come the store again. The most important thing is Smile, I think. Smile will make customers want to visit the store many time.

I found the appropriate store, not big and good atmosphere, yeaterday, and the store open 9 February! Perhaps I can be a Kanban-musume in the store... I hope my dream came true!!

This afternoon I am going to my club activity. I dance dance dance! After that I visit the house of one of my friends. I have not seen her since December, so I am so looking forward to talking with her. Though it is no connection with what I said, I am so so so so so so hungry. I want to go somewhere and have lunch, it might be too late it call it "lunch."

I will go to New Zealand Saturday next week. It sounds not true for me; I will go abroad. Last week I was given a paper which showed imformation about my host family!
My host father is Glaham, 31 years old.
My host mother is Kate, 31 years old.
A_nd! They hane a little girl child, Ameria 2 years old!
I am really looking forward to meeting them! I will write about my stay in NZ after, maybe. Bye!!