Today I am going to write about these things;
1.How do you think your academic writing has changed?
2.What do you think you still need work on?
3.What do you think you can do well now?
4.What will you work on the hardest in your final essay?
ANSWERS
1, I think my way of quoting has changerd because I didn't know the quoting rule at all.
2. I need to get more vocabulary at first. I think in order to write persuasive essay, I need to express what I think in various way.
Next, I am not good at quoting from other's opinion so that I make my topic stronger. Always my quote is a bit artificial. I should learn how to use quotation naturally.
3. I think I got to consider what lacks of in the essay in order to make it persuasive and clear to understand. I add quotration or explanation, or erase some quotation or explanation.
4.In my final essay, I kept in mind that making detail explanation about most everything concerned with my thesis. I think that made my thesis more persuasive.
Then, I want to write about my part-time job plan! Actually I am thinking about starting new part-time job seriously. Yesterday I talked about that topic; what is the best job for us, all day with Rina. I am working in Hotel as a meal server (too expensive pay!). However I have some trouble in the work as a server. That is, maybe you can not see what it is like, I can't bring 3 dishes at the same time. It is very serious problem! That makes work so slowry. Anyway I am seaching for something good job.
I am going to raise what I hope in part-time job.
1, The working place is near my hometown is better.
2, I wish I worked in little shop or restraunt as a star stuff!
3, Pay is beyond 900 yen per an hour.
Maybe that's all. Especially, 2 is important! Cany you see what I mean?
I use this expression, Star stuff, at first though. You can say it in Japanese as Kanban-musume. The girl who works in the restaurant and is like a mascot of the store. Is is fabulous? All Kanban-musume have good relationship with customers and often chat with them. Because I like to talk with stranger or people senior to me, it must be the best job for me. However as I read back I wrote; have good relationship with customers and often chat with them, it seems that Kanban-musume is a job like Hostes, isn't it?
Actually the part-time job as a kanban-musume never exist! Kanban-musume is like title given by customer or owner. All I can do is working at tiny restaurant or bar as a stuff. Whether I can become a Kanban-musume is what others decide. Just because I am eager to be a Kanban-musume make me real Kanban-musume. I need to work so hard that all customer and owner admire me and that customer want to come the store again. The most important thing is Smile, I think. Smile will make customers want to visit the store many time.
I found the appropriate store, not big and good atmosphere, yeaterday, and the store open 9 February! Perhaps I can be a Kanban-musume in the store... I hope my dream came true!!
This afternoon I am going to my club activity. I dance dance dance! After that I visit the house of one of my friends. I have not seen her since December, so I am so looking forward to talking with her. Though it is no connection with what I said, I am so so so so so so hungry. I want to go somewhere and have lunch, it might be too late it call it "lunch."
I will go to New Zealand Saturday next week. It sounds not true for me; I will go abroad. Last week I was given a paper which showed imformation about my host family!
My host father is Glaham, 31 years old.
My host mother is Kate, 31 years old.
A_nd! They hane a little girl child, Ameria 2 years old!
I am really looking forward to meeting them! I will write about my stay in NZ after, maybe. Bye!!
2009年2月3日火曜日
2009年2月1日日曜日
My January and Disney Land
I went to Tokyo Disney Land with one of my friends, Hitomi in January 9th. She and me had been planning to go to Disney Land for a year, but our schedule did not meet so far at all. We planned to go some times, but unfortunately every time the plan ended up canceled. Because of this, we were eager to go to Disney Land! Finally we were going to go to Disney Land, so we were so, so excited!!
The very day we went to Toyo Disney Land it was snowy in my hometown!! At first I was thinking that we had better postpone the plan. However I really really wanted to go that day, I decided to go! However when I went to Hachioji by train, it was rainy and to kitijoji it was cloudy! Because I was not thinking such a thing at home, I wore too much so that I can stand cold weather. Nearer Disney Land I went, the more I got distinguished from the crowd because of my heavy clothes!
At Tokyo station I and Hitomi met together. The day we went to Disney was Friday, so there were fewer people than usual. As soon as we arrived at Maihama station, we got so excited! Usually it takes much time even to enter the Land, but that day we can enter the Land without waiting!! It’s amazing!
After the gate opened we ran to Splash Mountain with our all power. It was because we thought that was the best popular attraction and would take us long waiting time if we did not go at first. We really ran!! Hitomi belongs to lacrosse club, so she had more stamina than me. I got really tired in running and almost felt a bit sick. However it was so funny to run from the gate to Splash Mountain. Every people don’t run with all their forces! In Splash Mountain we could ride without waiting any minutes. We enjoyed it a lot and kept laughing all the time in Splash Mountain. It must have seemed to be funny. But it was really funny! I loved that. As soon as we got off Splash, we shouted “I want to ride one more time!” Because it seemed that we don’t have to wait for next ride, we decided to try once more. Again, we could ride without long waiting time.
We went to Pooh’s Honey Hunt next. The attraction is famous for that we must wait the longest time of all attractions in Disney Land. HOWEVE even the Honey Hunt is possible to ride with 15 minutes’ wait. It was fantastic! I love the part of tiger jumping with us the best.
We watched the parade, of course. I Love the parade of Disney Land. We sat dawn on the first line. It was a bit rainy, so I really worried about parade’s cancel. However it was performed. They were wearing transparent courts on their costume, like wearing rain court. That was so fantastic! We waved our hands to pretty characters and even kiss our hands to them. Guffy and Donald noticed our kissing and they were kind enough to kiss back to us! I was so glad. Every character and dancers were wonderful, but Especially, we have fallen love with Peterpan. He was so cool! We talked about peter many times even after the parade.
As a lunch we ate hamburger. I remember that where we had a lunch (outside), there were some sparrows, fat sparrow! It was too fat. It was cute, but at the same time it looks like haughty. They were not afraid of humans at all.
We ate melon soda taste popcorn! Can you guess how it tastes? I thought it must be not goof before I eat it. We bought it because Hitomi was eager to eat that taste popcorn. Actually it was very nice to my surprise. I want to try again when I go to Tokyo Disney Land next.
The weather was rainy all along the day. However we did not use any umbrella, we used Raincourt! Isn’t it fabulous? I know exactly it is the most useful that we wear rain court in rainy in Disney Land. Umbrella has trouble in opening and closing every minutes we enter and get out, and umbrella need space to open. In that point Rain court is so useful. we just have to wear it.
The very day we went to Toyo Disney Land it was snowy in my hometown!! At first I was thinking that we had better postpone the plan. However I really really wanted to go that day, I decided to go! However when I went to Hachioji by train, it was rainy and to kitijoji it was cloudy! Because I was not thinking such a thing at home, I wore too much so that I can stand cold weather. Nearer Disney Land I went, the more I got distinguished from the crowd because of my heavy clothes!
At Tokyo station I and Hitomi met together. The day we went to Disney was Friday, so there were fewer people than usual. As soon as we arrived at Maihama station, we got so excited! Usually it takes much time even to enter the Land, but that day we can enter the Land without waiting!! It’s amazing!
After the gate opened we ran to Splash Mountain with our all power. It was because we thought that was the best popular attraction and would take us long waiting time if we did not go at first. We really ran!! Hitomi belongs to lacrosse club, so she had more stamina than me. I got really tired in running and almost felt a bit sick. However it was so funny to run from the gate to Splash Mountain. Every people don’t run with all their forces! In Splash Mountain we could ride without waiting any minutes. We enjoyed it a lot and kept laughing all the time in Splash Mountain. It must have seemed to be funny. But it was really funny! I loved that. As soon as we got off Splash, we shouted “I want to ride one more time!” Because it seemed that we don’t have to wait for next ride, we decided to try once more. Again, we could ride without long waiting time.
We went to Pooh’s Honey Hunt next. The attraction is famous for that we must wait the longest time of all attractions in Disney Land. HOWEVE even the Honey Hunt is possible to ride with 15 minutes’ wait. It was fantastic! I love the part of tiger jumping with us the best.
We watched the parade, of course. I Love the parade of Disney Land. We sat dawn on the first line. It was a bit rainy, so I really worried about parade’s cancel. However it was performed. They were wearing transparent courts on their costume, like wearing rain court. That was so fantastic! We waved our hands to pretty characters and even kiss our hands to them. Guffy and Donald noticed our kissing and they were kind enough to kiss back to us! I was so glad. Every character and dancers were wonderful, but Especially, we have fallen love with Peterpan. He was so cool! We talked about peter many times even after the parade.
As a lunch we ate hamburger. I remember that where we had a lunch (outside), there were some sparrows, fat sparrow! It was too fat. It was cute, but at the same time it looks like haughty. They were not afraid of humans at all.
We ate melon soda taste popcorn! Can you guess how it tastes? I thought it must be not goof before I eat it. We bought it because Hitomi was eager to eat that taste popcorn. Actually it was very nice to my surprise. I want to try again when I go to Tokyo Disney Land next.
The weather was rainy all along the day. However we did not use any umbrella, we used Raincourt! Isn’t it fabulous? I know exactly it is the most useful that we wear rain court in rainy in Disney Land. Umbrella has trouble in opening and closing every minutes we enter and get out, and umbrella need space to open. In that point Rain court is so useful. we just have to wear it.
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