Last blog in this semester!

Question about my writing

How do you think your academic writing has changed?
What do you think you still need to work on?
What do you think you can do well now?
What will you work on the hardest in your final essay?




About four months have passed since I enter this university.　



I am going to think about my writing in this class!

I think my academic writing has changed! At first I had used in essay "I think" many times. And I also had used "may" or "perhaps" many times. I know I should have confidence in what I say inmy essay to convince readers. And I had used "then" repeatedly as transition word. But now I know I should not use same words repeatedly.



What I think I still need to work on is making natural transition. I said that I had known it is not good to repeat same word. But I couldn't make natural transition yet, I think.And I sometimes made writing mistakes, so I should practice more sometime with dictionary.



What I think I can do well is avoiding repeated same words. Though it is not perfect yet, I think it became better. And thanks for this blog writing, I got used to write long sentence in English now.



In my final essay, I will do with poem, lovely one. The essays I wrote in my class are all about metaphar or simbol. So I think I will challenge another thing. Rythm and audience and so on. Because that poem is my favorite one, I will memorize it. Especially, I want to quote efectivery and make smooth transition.





I will try harder to make my writing much better.